Soon you’ll forget her scent and the sounds she makes when she has a nightmare. You’ll forget how her hands perfectly fit in yours, how her eyes twinkle like little stars in the nighttime sky and the many details you once fell in love with: the lines on her back that outline her bones, the stretch marks on her thighs and the wrinkles around her eyes.
Soon you won’t notice that her clothes don’t fit her anymore or that her bones are weary and her skin is pale. Then one day, you’ll look at her and see that she has lines drawn on her face and days printed on her hands. You’ll notice that her smile changed throughout the years and when she looks at you with the same passion, with the same love, with the same innocence as she did the night she said “I love you,” you’ll regret leaving her unnoticed.
Love, Alyazya
Thank you for your beautiful post. In two brief paragraphs you creatively used all five senses to describe a love lost. When I flip the images I capture what love has given and can never be taken away. My memory stands a vigilant guard. Ray
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Thank you for visiting my blog again, Ray. I think the biggest loss is leaving things unnoticed.
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You are so accurate – and those who do, end up living a life filled with regrets.
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This is very touching.. I love it☺️
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Thank you!
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As the song says, “you’re gonna miss me when I’m gone.”
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Powerful and moving. Beautifully done.
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This serves as an important reminder for anyone out there taking someone important to them for granted. I hope that I cannot be counted among them.
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Nice one. Can feel the emotions
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Beautifully crafted. Succinct, but precise.
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Appreciated that post and the words you used!
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Thank you!
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Salute for you!
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This transmits such powerful emotions. I really love it ❤.
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I’m glad you did!
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This post attracted me it is so well placed. And message always keep your precious one. Loved it✌️
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This made me sad, which I guess is what powerful writing does. Thank you!
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Beautiful writing.
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Thank you!
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I’m glad you are!
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I don’t know what this is called, but to me it is poetry. Thank you.
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Awwwwwww 💜
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Superb ! Brilliant actually! Very well written,Yazzeus!
Regards
ravi
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Thank you!
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